Plasmarift's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jetbak Startroopers]

The game was definitely interesting though I do have complaints (and praise) to write of:
- At the beginning, it is never shown what these objects I need to collect are so I spent a good amount of time ramming into objects hoping they were the things I needed to collect.
- You need to make it perfectly clear what the player can touch and what they can't (for example, I thought the black and yellow striped blocks were safe places to land at one point. Since I was able to sit on the beginning platform, I saw no reason why I couldn't sit on them). I also that the other animals could be interacted with and that the place where you are supposed to put the objects was a place I could enter (since it had an arrow).
- Why is it that only one block appears at a time? Why not have all of them appear and let the player decide which one they want to pick up first? (also, how is a player suppose to know where the next one will appear? There's no indicator so it forces the player to explore parts of the game where there was nothing before to see if something is there now. That's more annoying than fun.
- The game is kind of short.

Now for the good:
- I liked the controls. they were solid and provided for a somewhat challenging games.
- I liked that you added in the warning lights for the different hazards, that way, the player isn't forced to wait for the traps themselves to go off to ensure they would have enough time to cross safely.
- the square piece were fun to pick up. The player can sit on them and move left or right (at times, it looked like the character was doing skateboard tricks with them).

Still, it was a pretty good game. I look forward to your future projects.

Satyre responds:

Thanks for your detailed review. Here are my direct answers.
- I wanted to add a radar or arrows that appear after the spawning and after utilising a part, that's still on my to do list :)
- I have to think about how to realize this, because everything except the collectible parts and the start platform harms the player. Also added to the to do list.
- Blocks only appear after another, because the coding was very complex for the transporting. If all blocks are present, then they will be all attracted in the moment you are transporting one of them. Therefore I prevented this bug, by only letting one spawn at one time. I'll look into this for future updates, but it's time consuming.
- Yeah it's short, but also made in a week ;)
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- Thanks, that was the most important part of the gameplay.
- Warning lights were very important to add, to not let the game be too unfair by random obstacles. It's hard enough :D
- Yeah, that's also one of the helping aspects. When you got a piece then it helps you to get to machine faster.

[Flappy Race]

The game is okay, but the game relies on other people playing to make it difficult (I am guessing that the ghost birds of other people having played in the past), which usually doesn't work out unless the game is well-known and very well made. There are two things I'd like to comment on as well.
- The music is relaxing.
- the game starts too suddenly. There needs to be a ready set go after the "matching..." happens to prepare the player.

digiKhel responds:

Thanks Plasmarift!

Yes, I'm experimenting with the idea that people just need each other, to make life more difficult.
With regard to the game being well-known, maybe this will be that game? I don't know. People know Flappy Bird... so they may atleast try it out.

Regarding your comments, did you mean to say that the music went well with the game? Or did it seem out of place?

The suggestion about Ready,Set,Go! is pretty cool. I'll look into that.

[FactoryInspectorSimulator]

I like it. It kind of reminds me of an art game that tries to make a point about the repetitiveness of this kind of labor and the small pay that comes with it, but there's also humor in it along with some good music. However, I do have a few things I liked to say:
- I've reached day 16 and am up to $1172. The speed eventually seems to level out and doesn't increase after a time so there's no more challenge in continuing the game (unless there's some kind of ending like you get enough extra money to take a vacation).
- If you play it for too long on the faster levels, your vision begins to "sway", as in I can look away at a stationery object and it will look like it is moving. This not only leads to disorientation, but makes it hard to play the game.

Still, this is only a small free game so I shouldn't expect absolute perfection or hours upon hours of gameplay. It was enjoyable and I look forward to your next game release. Good job!

[McLaren P1 Simulator]

I have to agree with newname1. the mechanics are cool (though I hope you will fix that bug he mentioned. It does get annoying). I had fun just going up to 140 mph and going off a ramp. You could make a racing game, make a game of car tag; you ram into a car and that car is it and must tag another car. Or you could make something like the Extreme Driving Test, which has outrageous things you have to do to pass a test like parking a car onto of an unfinished building, driving on a highway during an alien attack. Or you could create a world of ramps and high places to jump off from. So many options. I look forward to your next release.

derikvlog responds:

Hello, how good it tastes. This is just a beta. I hope to post something better.

[Nothing You Have Done.]

Seems interesting though I came across a glitch on the level that wants you to move fast; you can keep moving right off the platform until you begin falling and eventually, the character falls out of range of the screen, leaving only a blank tannish screen.

It's very linear in that you can't even die or mess up (the path is completely set) so takes away from the game aspect and does make it feel more like an interactive movie, however, the message of the game is what really makes it stand out as I've yet to come across a game or movie for that matter that address this concept of praise. I applaud you and wish to encourage you to keep making games. (though I do have some suggestions)
- Try experimenting, especially with player interaction in the game. I could imagine this game being taken in a direction where there are different things a player can do in each level, but it always brings them to the same place (just like an addition).
- the eeriness of the game, especially in the strange things you included like the things that follow the character around, would be a good in creating a unique horror game. If you haven't played Gyossait or Vox Populi Vox Dei, check them out; you may like the interesting elements that are included in them.

heliopod responds:

Thanks for the suggestions Plasmarift. I think you are exactly right, it could use more non-linear and branching interactive directions. You might like some of my less linear work... digitalcreatures.net
Do spread to anyone and everyone. How do works make it to the front page by the way?

[DarkDungeon]

The game seems like an interesting survival game, but there seems to be a major problem: since damage is taken away when attacking an enemy, you are reliant on health potions and enemies produce very few (I receive a lot of food, but I've gone through several games without getting any health potions) so there's an imbalance. It also doesn't feel good that this game is based on luck; hoping you'll get an item you'll need. There's definitely decision making to be made, such as avoiding more powerful enemies until you are stronger, but the primary mechanic of receiving items is still random and makes the game a game of chance. Without receiving any health potions, you won't go far in the game.

zzulian responds:

I agree, thank you for this constructive review.