Plasmarift's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Archer Girl]

I'm sorry you're not getting much attention on your artwork. This is pretty nice, not perfect, but still nice. The brush strokes, especially for the green on the waist area are very smooth and makes the picture jump out at you. The girl's face is the most distinct feature of the4 picture so good choice making it the thumbnail. The hair is extremely well done and the face and eyes are very specific in detail. My complaints would be the scarf and arrows, they are very blurred and take away from the realness I see in the picture (I hope I phrase this right, but a painting or a work of art should look like what it is intending to portray and give the viewer this vision. You don't want someone to look at your picture and simply think its a picture, painting, or art. Art literally brings people to a new realm and it is shattered when they see imperfections). I don't know if all of that is right, but basically, the scarf doesn't look right compared to the rest of the picture. My last complaint would be her feet; they look very awkward in that they are almost pointing toward each other. It almost looks like you were planning to make her look like she was walking, but then changed your mind.

Still, it is a good piece and I hope to see more from you in the future.

Gel-9 responds:

thanks for the critique!

[Sheik dress up]

Pretty cool, though couldn't you have made this drawing take place a few seconds earlier :)

The purple background color was a great choice (it also matches the color of Zelda's regular princess dress). The shading is good though the stomach area almost looks mechanical (if that makes any sense) as it looks too precise (that's also a pretty big, oddly shaped belly button). I think her eyes and expression is what makes this picture awesome. Great job!

Cartridgeboy responds:

lol about the belly button ^_^ i was trying something a little different. i feel mhee about it. Thanks btw

[Hell Boy (Illustration)]

Well, this throws everything I've drawn on here to the toilet. I like the shading and detail that went into this. The perspective might be a little off (from where his foot is, it looks like his body should be back farther). This is still great. I look forward to seeing what else you'll make in the future.

DIWAKAR responds:

Woot woot thanx
But No Your art is awesome in its looks!! :)

[Final Fantasy Lesson #10-2.02]

I have to say, I disagree Riku, but still, great picture and interesting point on Final Fantasy. I think I'd love to see a transformation stop half way and they're just standing there covering themselves and they say, "I guess I didn't do it right."

HenLP responds:

Hahaha. xD

[sammy]

I don't know why you're not getting more attention from posting your art. They're both cute and cool. Keep up the good work!

ScruffMuhGruff responds:

thanks you, that means a lot.

[Ikki Tousen Fanart]

Never watched the series, but I looked her up. She looks better blonde (also, the blue eyes in this picture are fantastic). The outfit is cool and I also agree, the pose is nice as well though isn't it a little out of character? Still, great job!

Rennis5 responds:

Thank you, the uniform is bit off but I wasn't planning on this being fanart of hakufu until about half way through making it, like a happy accident :D

[GrooveMaster93]

I breath a sigh of relief. When I saw the thumbnail, it looked like your character was wearing black lipstick (nothing wrong with wearing it, but I would be a little frightened to see the rest of the picture had that been the case).

I'll be expecting to hear some good tunes soon!

WooleyWorld responds:

Me in my full leather assless chaps. Aw yeah.
As for posting it, I'm afraid it sounds too trash. aHaha. XD

[Thomas in da Club]

The moves that get all the chicks! Great animation!

WooleyWorld responds:

^_^

[The animal in me]

Very good design man! My only criticism is that the wolf looks like it has wrinkles instead of fur on its face (I know you were trying to make the wolf look like hair, but it might have been over on the top part of the wolf. Then again, I'm only one voice among the many).

How did you end up meeting the band and getting the job?

HeartlessArts responds:

thanks for the critiq really appreciated i just contacted them and they got back to me on facebook it was pretty simple

[Plasma Rifle]

For some reason, I really like this weapon and its name, but I'm not sure why... :)

anyways, this may not be "first class art", but the structure of the weapon is good and I notice some good shading done in some parts. Good luck with your other pictures, dude.

gustavolesmo responds:

thanks man, i really appreciate that.
it's why i post my drawnings here. it really makes me keep working
thanks a lot ;3