Plasmarift's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Figure Drawing Practice 1]

Man, that is one angry cat. So for an actual critique, the overall anatomy of the body looks great (I'm glad you didn't hop on the band wagon of giving all your girl drawings big boobs). I like the black and white outline of the art; I don't really know why, but it adds to the cartoonyness of the piece, which separates it from making it look realistic. It's something I've always wanted to learn (that probably didn't make much sense, but just take it as compliment). My only suggestions might be to make the elbows less pointy, the shoulders less flat, and maybe a different color for the lips as it seems to match the hair too much.

Also, I see the letters GW on the foot. Are those your initials?

(By the way, I tried googling it and checking your tumblr. I can't find the uncensured version. Maybe I'm a little too early)

WooleyWorld responds:

Oh yeah thanks for reminding me... I forgot to post it on Tumblr... Haha.

[Gale]

Pretty good though I prefer the short and stubby version of her without the rack. I'd recommend cleaning up some of the outlines, especially around her neck region and under the boobs. Keep up the good work!

LoliSakuya responds:

I prefer keeping my lines dirty mostly because I tend to lose some of the "energy" I had in the lines after I clean them up, if that made any sense.

[... I found the gif version]

I very much envy your skills in artwork and animation, especially with the shading. I'm still working on making a pixelated cow burst into flames.

By the way, can you get me the one on the right's number?

WooleyWorld responds:

There are much better artists on this site, though I appreciate your comment.

[Gladstone? More like Deadstone..]

That zombish guy looks like he wants a new arm and I think he just found a nice, soft slender one.

Definitely wouldn't expect this picture from you, as I've grown accustom to seeing you in a lot of your other pictures :) Good job on the character designs and as always, I'm looking forward to your next creation to be!

WooleyWorld responds:

These are Timesplitter characters. I'm on a roll with this style/ these characters so let's see what happens.

[Old surrealistic self portrait]

If this really is a self-portrait, then I must say, you look very beautiful. The detail and shading for the hair and face are extremely good (it's almost like their glowing). My only criticism would be the spot right below the rib cage; it looks like it comes to a point at the bottom where as the rest of the area above encompassed by the rib cage is smooth without any trace or slight indent of rib, like only the lung is there. I hope I explained that well enough. I don't know a whole lot about anatomy in drawing, but I just wanted to give my opinion. Good job on the drawing and good luck with your future ones.

bella-art responds:

Thank you very much! I really appreciate your review, I will definitely put more attention to anatomy in my next piece. :)

[Let's All Stare...]

Oh, I'm staring alright! Staring at that stone lighthouse and house on that wooden dock! That's some strong wood!

Anyways, good luck with this animation. The outfit look almost Persian in style.

WooleyWorld responds:

It's supposed to be Egyptian. But I do hardly any research that's not in game, so whoopsiedaisy,.

[Lakeview Cabin]

Darn it! You literally took my idea for a picture (I was going to have the picture of just him looking through the binoculars at the women. I'm only part way done with it). :(

Still, this is some very good art. It's like an comic book mixed with some anime (from the view in the binoculars. I think you'll do extremely well in the contest!

deathink responds:

I can't wait to see your pic man!

[NG Defenders:Alt. Dimension]

This is a pretty serious looking alternate dimension. Dad looks like an enemy from God of War, Tank Man looks like a skeleton/biker, Alien guy looks a lot more like a scary alien (though, no offense, it kind of looks like someone's wearing a realistic alien suit, as the lines on his chest don't seem to pop out), P-Bots wearing a turban (I think), and Pico's wearing a business suit as a sort of commander? Definitely not what I was expecting and certainly different! I'd suggest making Pico's black suit green because I didn't recognize who you were going for at first, but that's just my opinion. Is Dad wearing a blue cape? (I can't tell if it is a cape or a blue platform for Pico to stand to stand on).

Still, the detail and shading you put into this is great for the most part. The alien just needs a little work. I like the background as well; very ominous portal kind of thing. I really hope you get chosen for the collab. Good luck!

DIWAKAR responds:

Yeah ! Thats supposed to be a cape !
Thanx !! Woot !

[#mercenaryKings]

Your drawings are getting better and better! I am truly impressed with the shading on the clothing and skin, as well as the color choices. You're coming into your own unique drawing style, which is great! My only complaints/suggestions would be to have given the fire in the background more detail since, although it isn't one of the characters, it is still a big part of the picture. Also, I think the text in the speech bubble would have sounded better if you added the word "the" in-between "for" and "contest".

Keep up the great work and, although I haven't checked the contest page, be sure that you tag this picture correctly so that the judges can find it. Good luck!

DIWAKAR responds:

Thanx !Woot Woot Woot !