Plasmarift's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[PK Love Omega 9]

Although I haven't commented on the other comics before this one, I wanted to let you know I've seen them all and like reading them. Keep up the good work (I like your more realistic take on the story).

[Walkin to the Grocery Store..]

I love your suit! Where'd you get it!

WooleyWorld responds:

Walmart.

[CAPTION CONTEST!]

Okay. I know I said this before, but this time, I will win!!!

ToonHole responds:

Best of luck, Plasmarift!

[It Awakens]

I've actually been reading your comics for quite some time. I really liked the jokes up until very recently. I don't understand this one and a few others. I just wanted to let you know you have some people who appreciate your comics. Keep it up!

WaldFlieger responds:

Thanks a lot! :)

[Eyes!]

The picture is good, but you already uploaded this before a few pictures back. You called it Sakura.

Waveloop responds:

Yes I did... I changed it... It was bothering me

[Eye]

Nice work on the bright and awesome coloring of the iris though I would suggest using at least a little color on the rest of the iris instead of leaving it as black. Also, it may just be me, but the eye appears to be leaning to the left too much (I'm relating this to my own eye. I don't know for certain if different races or even genders for that matter have a difference in eye appearance. I always miss little details like this). Still, you did a great job at forming the eyelid and the place where the tears drain into (I forget the name). The shading on the skin is also pretty good except for the whiteness in the lower right corner. Good job. Good luck on your next art piece.

roekrScreen responds:

Hmm, yeah might be that I should have painted the limbal ring dark blue instead. I am not sure what you mean by it is leaning to the left. Or do you mean the angle? If so it is just because the eye isn't drawn horizontally. I used my own eye as ref :/ I think eyes are different from person to person, but there is also racial differences. For example some Asians got an eye fold.
Tear duct? Yeah, I am pretty happy with the tear duct.
Anyways, thanks for the review. Not sure if I am going to edit the eye or not, but I might consider it.