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[10 Seconds]

I like the game and I've beaten it in the past, but I'm pretty sure it's broken now. After the level with the cannons and moving platforms, I get a level that has a row of moving spikes and whenever I die on that level, my character and the spikes don't respawn so I'm left with a timer that won't count down, the weird trophy thing, and the music.

If you want more details, you can send me a message.

MrNannings responds:

thanks for your relpy. The game is crashing because there is something wrong with the newgrounds api for the medal intergration. I hope there will be a new api plugin soon.

[Arise 2]

The game is okay, but it honestly seems kind of boring and less difficult compared to the original. I reached over 2000m, got bored, and killed the bird on purpose. The only incentive I have to go further would be for the medals (which I had completely forgotten about when I killed the bird). I think what made the original so good was that it put the player on edge, perhaps by making the lava rise quicker.

I also don't really understand the point of the other birds since they barely impede the player (and I don't think them making a pinball sound really matches with the game).

Still, it was a pretty cool game and I liked the other birds' designs and the abilities you gave them. I look forward to your next game.

I do have two questions though:
- What are those red flying thing that kill you if you touch them? Are they birds? If so, then shouldn't the fire bird also kill them since its description says it kills other birds.
- Who is the girl with the chainsaw suppose to be?

Mantis1 responds:

The lava speed in the original was actually slower if you can believe it! But you're right, the original was more engaging and so the player was on more of an edge.

My theory is that Abyss 2 plays better and is much more polished, but the original is *the better game* because it was very enigmatic. I didn't know how to make a game at the time, so I was coming up with stuff on the fly. The end result was something very unique. By comparison, the sequel is more safe, familiar, and commercial and I think that's what killed it. I consider Abyss 2 a lesson on how I should NOT make a game and I'm going to keep it in mind for the future.

For the pinball sound effect of the birds, I made it intentionally jarring to make it funny. See this:
https://youtu.be/XczKQAAVbaA?t=4m47s
It made me laugh, but I should have tested the actual potency of that joke with real players, unfortunately, it's hard to get play-testers for a free mobile game.

Thanks for your feedback! It certainly opened me on more stuff to think about!

As for your questions:
- They're actually bats with skulls. And logically yes, the fire bird *should* be able to kill them. Unfortunately, that would make the game too easy. I could have fixed it if I made the bats breathe fire or leave a poisonous substance, but too late ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
- The game was planned to have between 20-50 characters, not just birds. Other humans and even a dragon as protagonists. So I took the girl, Bunny, from another prototype game I was working on with the hope that I'll add more human characters later. But I stopped once I felt I added enough characters for an initial release.

[Hard as hell demo]

I'm not seeing the super difficulty here. I beat the game in less than 2 minutes. It just takes a little control and light pressing to get through it.

I will say that:
- The hit boxes are a little big.
- better and more diverse artwork can go a long way.
- more levels are needed since many of the ones in the game now can be beaten in less than 10 seconds (I'm not saying to make them longer. Just make more of them, though I guess you could make them a little longer).
- Don't forget to put in a mute button for people that want to play it and listen to their own music.

As for the good:
- I think the music is a good fit.
- The character sprite is cool and funny.
- The game is challenging because of the controls. Usually this is a bad thing, but in this case, I feel it offers a different experience to the player. I would suggest putting in a level where you have to run to pick up speed to get over something, with the character moving so fast already.

If you need any help with the artwork and sprites, let me know and I'd be happy to help.

WolaLand responds:

This is a demo, so i'm working on it.
And thank you for your petition but I don't need more sprites, thank you a lot :D.

[HEL VS HELL]

The game has some problems:
- in world three with the guy who looks like he's throwing swords, he kept backing up and I'm pretty sure he backed up so much he went through the locked gate and disappeared so now I'm stuck, unable to unlock the gate.
- You don't explain what the "weapons" do. I'm guessing the spear looking one make your bullet go straight instead of arching and the sword one just increases damage. You should explain this because the sword one isn't easy to figure out. Also, I'm not able to drop them or heal myself while I'm holding them.
- I ended up with over 1000 ammo so maybe reset the amount after heading to the next area.

For suggestions,
- Add a reset level button
- Even if the controls are explained in game, it couldn't hurt to explain them in the description.
- Maybe make the enemies shoot in patterns or make enemies that float so they shoot in star patterns. Just having enemies that spawn fire that moves toward you is kind of boring.
- Maybe give the player a jetpack that runs on the ammo later in the game so that they can attack enemies in the air (in those parts, maybe have it so you can gather more ammo by pressing down in front of station that you have turned blue, but they need to recharge overtime).
- Maybe add other weapons like actual swords and spears where you can ram enemies and red stations. Other ideas for weapons.
-- Weapon that shoots bigger ice to hit things easier
-- Machine gun, rapid fire
-- Ice that can be aimed as if you were throwing it or aiming a gun

I did enjoy playing the game. I wish you luck in your future creations.

Cyoses responds:

I'm really glad you enjoyed the game and played through it so extensively!\

As for the fight you got stuck in I'm afraid that's a bug I've never seen before, I'm really not sure what happened, and I'm really sorry that happened to you. The weapons really weren't implemented as well as I had hoped. I completely agree that more explanation was needed, although you got both the names and abilities correct. Your 1000+ ammo is a bit of an anomaly, I've had quite a few players who find them selves running low so I'm not sure how it could be better handled. Some sort of balancing mechanic that only comes into effect 500+ or so might work.

As for your suggestions, a reset button would be great, allowing player to reset if they have a problem is something I'll definitely start implementing. Putting the controls in the description is something I can definitely do, I didn't really see a point but it wouldn't hurt anyone to have them there.

For all your other suggestions, they're great! I feel like more weapons, tools, or enemies would have made the game a lot more fun. I'll keep that in mind when designing my next games!

Thank you for all your feedback,
~ Cyoses

[Jesse's big secret]

Honestly, it seems more depressing than interesting. The poor guy has everything bad happen to him and not even his own family helps him out or the production studio? Also, there are a lot of plot holes:
- There's a difference between being charged with an offense and having to serve jail time. Jesse didn't go to court over the offenses, one of which the airlines admittedly made a mistake.
- Most, if not all, security rooms are going to have security cameras, usually to make sure security officers are doing their jobs right and to verify what happened in the rooms. The footage would have shown that it was an accident.
- It's one thing to have the worst circumstances befall a character, but it should at least make sense. Why wouldn't Jesse be on the fly list and why wouldn't he be identified by the studio? The only explanations are that the assistant that gave him the tickets rigged these things because she wanted to get him in trouble (but how could she know the incident on the plane would happen?) or Jesse is insane and imagined the whole filming studio situation or the filming studio somehow set this up to make a live action series on a guy that gets sent to a women's prison to avoid getting raped while trying to hide the fact that he's a guy. This plot seems more like its unfolding as a porno rather than a legitimate story.

Also, the dialogue begins to become repetitive like the whole rape conversation in the jail cell. Sorry to be so negative, but I went into this with intrigue only to be kind of let down. Still, I wish you luck with the project.

[The Blind World]

The game concept is interesting, but the gameplay makes it extremely difficult if near impossible to get the best ending:
- when jumping on the treadmills, it either launches the player too low or too high, which will often cause the player to hit the saw blades (it doesn't seem right that the saw blades cause instant death in many cases.
- if you land on top of the sword guys, you can't jump and can only fall left or right and doing so will lead to the guys to attack the player. Also, in confined areas, like trying to reach the leader, you can still be pinned against walls.
- The demon red dog and robots often can get stuck on the player or under them and get damage taken away (the dog one happen when the player is too close hitting it while it is vulnerable and it comes back to life, causing the player to get stuck underneath it.
- Also, in the first encounter with the dog, it is tough to jump over it because the margin for error is so small (plus, if you fail to, you can get pinned against the wall.

I look forward to your next game.

[The Epic Gang]

I'm actually very upset right now because I spent over three hours playing the game, saved multiple times, and then closed the window to come back to it later only to find out it didn't save. I even started a new game to see if the save feature worked at all and saved at the first save point and when I loaded the game again, it still didn't save. I don't know why this is. Perhaps look into it? I'm using Google Chrome as a browser.

As for the game, it is good. The gameplay is engaging, the items you can collect encourages exploration, and the fairy that heals you is a nice upgrade for the player, but there are some problems.
- As others have pointed out, the English is bad. Next time, just ask someone to look over it for you. I'd gladly do so.
- You can still use the flasks even if you are at full health and have no ailments. I think you should disable it and have the game make a sound to alert the player that using it would be useless (I accidentally pressed the wrong button and used up a number of my flasks when I was at full health).
- Although you offer the option to change the controls, why not have multiple options for the controls? (have the default set up and have the keys z x c s be another option for controls). Also, even when you change the controls, you still need to use the default controls when interacting with puzzles and the pause menu. Why is that? Also, why can;t the player change the controls in the pause menu during the game?
- a map would be very appreciated because it is very easy to get lost or to forgot where something is (I had remember coming across a lock that needed the key of sorrow so I decided to go looking for it when I found the key and it took a long time to find it). Plus, it gets very tiring backtracking through monsters while your aimlessly trying to find something you already passed. Maybe have a map where it contains markers that show that a locked door and chest are in that area. You could also have it where an area isn't revealed on the map until a player moves through it.
- The enemy designs are good, but some of the enemies back away when you try to approach them to attack, which is very irritating (especially since the enemies can float off of the platforms out of reach) because it forces the player to bait the enemies more in land so they can attack).
- You don't offer any explanation of the what the ailments do to the player, like curse and inhibition. You might think its apparent, but having a clear explanation would also be nice, especially for the inhibition one (maybe an area in the menu?). an explanation for how exactly the fairy works would have been nice as well.
- often times, you leave little to no room for the player to fight. In a number of instances, this can be interesting and perhaps even fun and challenging, but when you corner a player in a room with a large number of enemies, this goes from fun to just annoying. You really need to strike a balance with this.
- Why is it that the environment does not affect the monsters at all? Why not have explosion hurt them when they can hurt the player?
- The second boss (the fire guys), this one seems a little unfair. You leave the player very little time to strike at the boss since they constantly try to pounce on you (since they rarely due so in sync with one another, trying to attack during this time will usually result in the player's death). I chose the berserker option at the beginning and basically focused a lot of power into attack, yet I still struggled to take them down because my attacks took away very little health. I'd suggest having it so detonating a bunch of bombs near them will hurt them. Otherwise, I don't know how to go about doing the battle.

Still, I want to say I enjoyed the game, but the fact that it didn't save really hurt me and I don't know if I want to go through the game again.

DarkenSoft responds:

We are sorry about that.
But it's strange because It works to us, you can try to update your browser or cancel the cookie.

It's our first attempt to create a game and we made a lot of mistakes.
Thank you for the feedback.

[Apollina´s Spell - Greek antique parody]

The game is good, but there are a few things wrong with it:
- Although others don't seem to have a problem, none of the medals are unlocking for me. Do I have to beat the game for them all to unlock?
- The english in this game is kind of bad. You should really get someone to go over it for you.
- A few times, the time it takes to load is a little too long.
- ChronoNomad has a point. The player doesn't always know what can be used to kill enemies (jump on them or stab them) until its too late.

[Kill! Kill! Street Level]

People seriously need to read. If instructions aren't in the game then you check the description (though I will admit that you need to be very direct with the rules, such as stating "Your goal is to kill all stickmen without anyone witnessing the murders. Click on objects to move and activate them.") Still, the game works and this isn't the first game to do something like this, such as the ClickDeath series so I don't understand why people are confused.

I think you did a good job on this and I hope you make more, though I have a few suggestions.
- Right off the back, you have a timed event where within the first 10 seconds, the game will end if you don't kill the guy on the roof. By this point, players are still trying to figure out what they can click on so having this right at the beginning is frustrating. Maybe have a timed event like this activate right after the first time a player clicks on something or add a pause button where all action freezes and the player can't activate things (though still have it so their mouse will change whenever they move over something clickable so they can learn what to click on).
- There's a bug. If you click on the car to make it fall over while the guy isn't underneath it and then you click on the skateboard, the guy will grab it and then point at the car as if someone was killed and you lose. Is that intentional?
- This isn't necessarily bad, but I was able to press the tab button to find all the clickable places. It helped me figure out how to beat the game.

I look forward to your next game. Good luck!

ssjbryando responds:

Very late response. But very good points, thanks!

[Oh! I'm Getting Taller!]

The game is very good. I really like the art style, the music is fitting and exploring the game is fun (although it gets a little annoying when you need to back track because you didn't know the route you were taking was going to lead to the end). Still, this can't always be helped.

I have a question though: I confront the ghosts yet when I return to talk to the girl, she just asks me the same question, as if the event never happened. Was I supposed to let the ghosts get me or is this a bug?

elfgamesworks responds:

Is not a bug, it's a lack of dialogues. You did well passing the ghosts, is just her that don't gives you feedback. How mean! ;D
Thank you for your feedback, this will be fixed in the future updates. ^ ^