Plasmarift's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Form]

You did a great job on the overall shape and shading, but there are a few parts that seem wrong to me. The hip on the left side doesn't look like it comes out enough and I can see like lines on the stomach, some of which look like they were part of the original sketch outline (like on the stomach). Also, the shading on the legs and left arm look like squiggly lines. Still, I like the overall drawing (you drew the face very well and the pose is also good).

Luciaea responds:

Thanks for the detailed review. About squiggly lines: I try to keep my work close to realism but don't want it to become photographic copy... so I want you to see it as a drawing... hence the shade outline on the stomach was erased originally, but I added it back in. On the other hand, if it's bothering you, I probably did not get it right enough to get the feeling of drawing across...

I'll take note of your comments and be sure to watch for them in future work.

[Supergirl]

This does fit with your drawing style though it looks very similar to many of your other drawings. Still, this doesn't take away from all of the work you did on this piece. Good work.

[VENOMing]

The picture is very attractive (you're really showing a lot yet still clinging to your rule of showing no private parts). The anatomy and proportions are all good. Though I think I have to agree with one of the guys below me; I'd like to see you try something else once and while, just to experiment because I think you'd do a good job at it. Still, good work.

[Kaname Madoka]

I've never heard of the series, but the picture looks great. Good work with the shading, lighting effect, and vibrant colors. The way she is running, however, looks a little awkward; her knees are nearly touching each other and if she was actually running, her other leg would be more forward than it is to take the next step (though if her leg was like this, I don't think it would look as good).

I also like what you did with the background. It appears to be transitioning to day where she is running while behind her, it is night (I don't really understand the purple zig zag though). Still, very good job on this picture. My final comment is this: are those arms growing out of the cat's ears?

lilHeart responds:

Thank you~! ^^
Oh, yeah I noticed that the legs were kind of off but I noticed it only after I started coloring. :/
That happens way too often. TT_TT ugh
Uhh well in the show there are witches that, when encountered, warp the world, like everything becomes weird and wacky, so that's why I kind of put those zig-zags there
They were meant like a glimpse of that warped surrounding.

Oh my, umm that's a good question. :D I don't even know if those are arms. I don't think they are.
I did not design this character so I have no idea but all I can say is that it's not a cat but a magical alien creature. If that helps. XD

[Miku]

Very good for a test! I had no idea who this character was at first (she reminded me of the girl from Bakugon). Great work on the shading and anatomy structure and for leaving the character with some dignity (not showing everything).

[Needs?]

Seems that this piece has a statement of deeper meaning that corresponds with the title; the title says "Needs?" as in questioning why the character (who appears to be a withered man and is naked among nature. A reference to the Garden of Eden. Perhaps he looks that why based on choices that he made.) looks up at the items (that are coming out of his head) with envy when all of the items are not necessary for survival; They're just comforts. It seems the man should be focusing on more important things like food, water, and clothes. Very good picture and message. The artwork isn't superb, but it is good and definitely better than anything I have made. Great job.

Nersul responds:

Thanks for the review.

[Happy Holidays Chunny]

Definitely an interesting lighting effect in the background. Very good job on the shading, but the colors come off as a little too bland or not diverse enough. I know that might be how her costume looks in the game, but the colors could've been more vibrant. Still, very good job on drawing her face; it looks incredible. Great work!