Plasmarift's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hearse of Strahd]

Despite the monologue not being groundbreakingly new, I very much enjoyed it; that vampire has a way of words (and the voice performance was both fitting for a vampire and well performed, you little shit). The face of the vampire and his posture were perfect and the generic looking knight at the beginning was great for absorbing that monologue. The music and sound were good as well. Though my favorite part by far was the bingo card. I got multiple laughs from reading it (despite not knowing all the references or understanding all of it).

Overall, a great animation. I hope to see more from you, you little shit.

[Flossing Mishap]

Amazing that the guy both flosses and brushes incorrectly.

The animation made me visually cringe in fear and disgust, which is saying something (I thought I'd been thoroughly desensitized to horrifying stimulus, save for jump scares). The art style rides the line between cartoonish and realism, which is perfect for this type of animation. Sound effects were fitting and poignant (I'd actually be interested to know where you found them or how you made them).

As for what actually happened, I knew something horrifying was going to happen, but I was not expecting that, so your surprise was well done (and the undulating was unsettling). Also, nice mask at the beginning.

I wish I could say more, but I'd just be rambling at that point. Very good job!

[Despair]

I can tell you've still got that touch when, after having been away from your content for a while, I finish the video and think "what the fudge did I just watch?"

The cat girl threw me though. Since when did anime characters exist in the Sexual Universe? Is she single?

I guess the only suggestion would've been to make the email part a tad longer. Nyan

[pizza guide.]

There is so much I liked about this animation!

**Spoilers ahead**

From Willard straight up stealing a pizza shop to make a pizza to his methodical movements, nearly every moment in the animation has something interesting going on, even him just adding ingredients (I especially liked how he fell out of the can at the beginning and him falling backward while putting in salt and something else. Second only to him shooting the creature so many times). The silliness was outstanding, yet it stayed focused on the mission of making the pizza and you weren't afraid to get pretty dark with it.

The quick progression segments of the animation are a major plus in my book. Most of it strikes a good balance between staying just long enough to where you can tell what's going on and not lingering long enough to get boring. You could say it has a natural flow at times (those were probably my favorite parts, especially the attempts at cooking part). It was also good of you to break this flow (like the basement part) as this keeps it from getting stale (though I have to say it stayed a little too long on the basement, specifically the cockroach part).

Also, thanks for getting straight to the point at the beginning. Some might have had a character stumble across a pizza recipe in a cook book while looking through it, have a moment that zooms in on the picture of the pizza with angelic background noises, and then cuts to the character trying to make it. Willard knew exactly what he was going to do from the beginning, no lead up needed.

Out of all of it, Willard shined the brightest (as he should being the star). His expressionless and near sociopathic behavior were awesome (I can't imagine I'd ever say that about a person in real life, but that's beside the point).

For suggestions, while all the things that happened after falling back to Earth were interesting, I think some of them could have been funnier. For example, maybe after the pinball affect with the buildings, have the building on the right blink "New High Score" in the windows or something. Or for the plane part, have Willard almost hit a bird, miss, and then the bird gets sucked into the engine of the plane. Just some ideas; not sure how good they are. I did like the bad stand up comedy part and the resolution of the black creature.

Overall, excellent work! You've got skills, sir!

WillardWorm responds:

this was a wonderful critique. thank you very much!

[Fashion Police 2; Censor the Planet]

I'd definitely suggest bumping up the sound more (I had my sound up all the way and it was still kind of quiet) and balancing out the audio (some voices came across as louder and quieter than others, especially during conversational parts). As for the animation, it's unique I'll give it that. I was happy to be a part of this project. I wish you luck in your next endeavor!

DextaGethood responds:

Thanks! Sound mixing is my biggest weakness but finding a cheap sound mixer isn't easy either. But thanks for your feedback

[The Dark Harvest - Episode 1]

I thought the quality of the animation and the voice acting were great. The music was also good and fitting for the scenes it was included in. The story was good as well, however, I found the fact that most of the dialogue was "What's going on?" "Shhhh" to be annoying; in the time it took him to keep telling her he couldn't tell her, he could have told her 10 times (she's part of a grim reaper cult basically). It felt like you made it so he couldn't tell her just to keep some mystery involved in the story. If you want mystery included, you need to set it up and have it make sense and not have it be because "I can't tell you because it would make the story less cool". Also, why was she shocked that something happened in a room that had crime tape covering it? Other than that, I look forward to the next installment of the series. Good luck!

[Raw Latex 4]

This is awesome. How did I miss this for so long? Five days of my life wasted...

All brooding aside, I am glad you continued this series. I can honestly say there isn't much else like it. Good luck!

[Avatar: Last Hairbender]

I can see why it's one of your favorite animations... it's awesome! (except for the joke about Korra. Just kind of cold) I came into this with somewhat low expectations for some reason, but was blown away by the comedy (or maybe I just have a weird hair fetish or something). I especially like your opening with your username on it (reminds me of some professional movie company or something). The voicing, music, sound effects, animation (unique and with added cartooniness here and there. That might not be a word), nearly all of the writing is great (don't really get the kindergartner comeback joke) and the drawing at the end are great! Nothing really comes to mind to improve though I hope you'll keep pushing the boundaries on this kind of stuff. Give my regards to SilverPoyozo and I look forward to your next animation.

WooleyWorld responds:

Haha. He'll be glad to hear people liked his work. You should find that intro professional.... its ripoff from the old United Artists intro from way back. I do intend to push the elements of my animations and keep the boundaries ever extended. :p

[Sex Hair II The Woolening]

It's awesome. It's worthy of an emmy and a life time supply of moose and sandwiches!

But I'm sad. You didn't ask me to help out :( (single tear)

WooleyWorld responds:

Worry not, Plasma. Should I need you, you will know.
But no really, thanks for the comment.

[CHEAP MEDS]

Scroler, you sound like a jerk. At some point in all series, it will always reach that point where there are fewer shocking character surprises to throw in to throw you off balance because even regular people only have so many things going on in their lives and with their personality, that includes made up ones (even if the shock continued, I feel like he'd "jump the shark" at some point with these and that it would make the characters less real). Just be entertained at the presentation, because I can seriously picture this being like one of those commercials bad in the day. I loved the music (I replayed it like 4 times on Youtube) though I do wish it was longer. Their voices are unique and add a nice change of pace from the auto tuned, generic voices of today's pop music.